超强加州旅店翻译

eve520jijiaya

On a dark desert highway cool wind in my hair
Warm smell of colitas rising up through the air
Up ahead in the distance I saw a shimmering light
My head grew heavy and my sight grew dim
I had to stop for the night
There she stood in the doorway;
I heard the mission bell
And I was thinking to myself
’This could be Heaven or this could be Hell’
Then she lit up a candle and she showed me the way
There were voices down the corridor,
I thought I heard them say...
Welcome to the Hotel California
Such a lovely place
Such a lovely face
Plenty of room at the Hotel California
Any time of year, you can find it here
月黑大漠路迢迢，风高凛冽客思归，
人倦眼乏昏欲睡，闻香忽见灯火碎，
但见有女娉婷立，耳畔钟声如乐起，
天堂地狱两相忘，浑然不似在人间，
秉烛引路过画廊，人声嘈杂迎客至：
加州客栈诚待客，虚位以侯游子回，

Her mind is Tiffany- twisted, she got the Mercedes bends
She got a lot of pretty, pretty boys, that she calls friends
How they dance in the courtyard, sweet summer sweat.
Some dance to remember, some dance to forget
So I called up the Captain,
’Please bring me my wine’
He said,’We haven’t had that spirit here since nineteen sixty nine’
And still those voices are calling from far away,
Wake you up in the middle of the night
Just to hear them say...
Welcome to the Hotel California
Such a lovely place
Such a lovely face
They livin’ it up at the Hotel California
What a nice surprise, bring your alibis
衣香鬓影佳人意，玉郎终始为君来，
放歌纵舞前廊院，香汗淋漓未尽欢：
纵使笙歌能醉月，情未忘我怎忘情？
便向校官索美酒，经年未备意阑珊，
午夜梦回旧馆舍，声声呼唤充耳闻，
倦鸟羁留深林久，此间乐哉不思飞，

Mirrors on the ceiling,
The pink champagne on ice
And she said ’We are all just prisoners here, of our own device’
And in the master’s chambers,
They gathered for the feast
The stab it with their steely knives,　
But they just can’t kill the beast　　
Last thing I remember, I was
Running for the door
I had to find the passage back
To the place I was before
’Relax,’said the night man,
We are programmed to receive.
You can checkout any time you like,
but you can never leave
宝镜倒映烛影晃，寒冰装点酒色红，
宾客齐至成盛筵，佳人美酒俱添光，
轻启朱唇惊四座，投杯停箸不能食：
钢刀银叉手中持，心魔犹在不能消，
自我羁押成囚徒，吾辈颓然尚不知。
闻言惊觉寻旧路，四顾茫茫无着处，
明朝更向何处去？更者悠然言少歇：
纵然我辈长别离，此生有命不能弃，
前路漫漫归旧旅，生此回环无尽时。

adi_kd

翻译的确实不错，可都成这样了，还有法唱么？呵呵，我这是纯属鸡蛋挑骨头，没事儿找抽。

夫夫

不错啊！加分！

愤怒的馅饼

-__-~ 果然够强~ 可以配以古筝谱曲了

真真正正

试了一下套到原旋律中，没法唱了。找了断古琴曲，准备练一下朗诵板的《中文加州旅店》。

lipengzhu

很有创意。 这首曲子百听不厌。

baiwan

如果要有吉他那么强效果感的钢琴版就好了

leizi19821982

不错呀，学习了

孤独的晏子

这个版本的翻译几年前在别处见过。相当佩服膜拜译者的汉语水平。
从中可见汉字的优美，的确是人类的丰富遗产了。
可窃因为 这样的翻译只是逐句硬生生的用文言文的形式套出来再加工罢了。与原作所要表达的主题寓意有些偏差，给人的印象就是个风流 寂寞 迷惘的大侠在夜色的大漠中钻进了加州旅馆里醉生梦死，
事实上，这种意识流的歌词是相当难翻译的，写这样的歌词也是要相当功力的。所以这首歌的确是载入史册的作品。
要翻译好它必须要了解原作当时的创作的背景，原作是在当时毒品泛滥，整个社会缺失太多的精神等等的情况下写的，寓意相当深刻，也可以简单的说是一首禁毒的作品。而不能简单的字面翻译，比如 lit up a candle 意思是要吸毒，而不是简单的点蜡烛。。。等等多处地方，都翻译不到位。。。
再次向伟大的老鹰致敬！

男人一品

确实超强啊，不过我想问下大伙：加州旅馆有两个版本，就是主唱打鼓和不打鼓的2个版本的，你们更喜欢哪一个一点?

pianist

真佩服此人文学功底！

brucelp75

以前英文不好的时候第一次听《加州旅馆》，除了觉得好听之外，猜想这应该是个爱情主题的歌曲，后来英文进步了再去看歌词，才发现原来是个鬼故事，老鹰乐队真的很有才，撞鬼也能写成经典。。。。。

wcwsad110

有才···   厉害···      问题挺不错···  这个是 自己写的吗？？？{:2_65:}